I do think Draco's pride is at least as much in the way of the romance as Harry's potion is.
It's so hard to write Harry under this potion, because the temptation is to make him constantly feel things and bite them back- but most of the time he honestly doesn't feel them. On the other hand, he can still be passionate with love or joy or delight, as he was with Draco earlier in the chapter. I'm glad you're enjoying him.
I wish I could say I write fics like that (because I enjoy them as well), but mine usually do end up with equal relationships, and if they don't, there's something badly wrong.
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I do think Draco's pride is at least as much in the way of the romance as Harry's potion is.
It's so hard to write Harry under this potion, because the temptation is to make him constantly feel things and bite them back- but most of the time he honestly doesn't feel them. On the other hand, he can still be passionate with love or joy or delight, as he was with Draco earlier in the chapter. I'm glad you're enjoying him.
I wish I could say I write fics like that (because I enjoy them as well), but mine usually do end up with equal relationships, and if they don't, there's something badly wrong.
Thank you very much for the compliment.