Someone wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-02-28 01:41 am (UTC)

Oh dear! That evil, evil woman!

Draco has to ask for Harry's help! He really fears his judgement and losing his respect, does he?

The discussion between both men, before, was captivating, as always. I also loved Harry's tender concern for Draco. He needs it!

"Draco turned his head and looked in another direction, as if (she) couldn’t be bothered with Harry’s plebeian friendliness."

Should it be he instead of she?



Nimue

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