I love so many things about this story, I'm gonna make a list.
1- I love a stubborn, self-sacrificing Harry, with is ill-conceived but well intentioned plans. Very canon. I also love his annoyance with Draco and his pleading.
He had given his life for Draco. No, more than that; he had consented to be alive and suffer forever for Draco. What greater gift was there than that? What more did he want?
2- I love a snarky Draco (who can speak- yay!) almost as much as I love a devoted Draco. Interested to see the dynamic b/n the two now that their feelings are WAY out.
3- I love your writing style. Normally, when stories try to do something like this, I get lost pretty quickly and give up. This is fluid and interesting and actually makes some modicum of sense. Good job!
Ok, so it's a short list. But I do love your story, and hope this isn't the end. This isn't the end, is it? Cause I desperately need some debrief with Ron and Hermione. And, of course, more Harry and Draco.
no subject
1- I love a stubborn, self-sacrificing Harry, with is ill-conceived but well intentioned plans. Very canon. I also love his annoyance with Draco and his pleading.
He had given his life for Draco. No, more than that; he had consented to be alive and suffer forever for Draco. What greater gift was there than that? What more did he want?
2- I love a snarky Draco (who can speak- yay!) almost as much as I love a devoted Draco. Interested to see the dynamic b/n the two now that their feelings are WAY out.
3- I love your writing style. Normally, when stories try to do something like this, I get lost pretty quickly and give up. This is fluid and interesting and actually makes some modicum of sense. Good job!
Ok, so it's a short list. But I do love your story, and hope this isn't the end. This isn't the end, is it? Cause I desperately need some debrief with Ron and Hermione. And, of course, more Harry and Draco.