I'm so late in reading this! I kept on linking to the 'A Potion Named Desire' page and then realized that duh, of course it wouldn't be put up here now! I'm such a silly girl.
As for this, I can really say that this is such a grounded story. I'm not sure if it means the same to you as it means to me. It's just that, the story is written in a clean, simple manner that is wonderful to read. Fancy descriptive ones are good but sometimes they just jumble the mind. You only reserve the lovely lovely descriptions when it's an intense moment to emphasize it. Or maybe I'm just reading it like that.
The plot thickens, I see. Harry is adorable, misleading that fellow pretending to be outraged at the possible harm done to the snake as they were harvesting its parts. Funny. And a bit cunning to try and confuse his opponents by creating shadows, which is such a good term. And I love how you incorporate Daphne Greengrass into the story, making it canon-easy in a roundabout way. But I still await the slash. So eagerly. Do you, by any chance, write love scenes? =>
Yes Harry, do wield your immense influence in the wizarding world to protect yourself and Draco. And love, it's more than acceptable to be lonely for Draco. ♥
PS: I adore that you update so fast. Sometimes if the intervals are too long, one forgets what happened in the previous chapter. Say hello again to my long, long comments. =P
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As for this, I can really say that this is such a grounded story. I'm not sure if it means the same to you as it means to me. It's just that, the story is written in a clean, simple manner that is wonderful to read. Fancy descriptive ones are good but sometimes they just jumble the mind. You only reserve the lovely lovely descriptions when it's an intense moment to emphasize it. Or maybe I'm just reading it like that.
The plot thickens, I see. Harry is adorable, misleading that fellow pretending to be outraged at the possible harm done to the snake as they were harvesting its parts. Funny. And a bit cunning to try and confuse his opponents by creating shadows, which is such a good term. And I love how you incorporate Daphne Greengrass into the story, making it canon-easy in a roundabout way. But I still await the slash. So eagerly. Do you, by any chance, write love scenes? =>
Yes Harry, do wield your immense influence in the wizarding world to protect yourself and Draco. And love, it's more than acceptable to be lonely for Draco. ♥
PS: I adore that you update so fast. Sometimes if the intervals are too long, one forgets what happened in the previous chapter. Say hello again to my long, long comments. =P