ext_194254 ([identity profile] neji-chan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-01-20 02:57 am (UTC)

They did it. They did it!! :D I have to say, I loved the brewing scene. They worked together as if they’ve been doing it all their life, and the sharing of magic was so very intimate. The concept of passive and active magic, and how they differ, was brilliant. And oh, the UST at the end… Harry licking Draco’s neck, the way they looked at the other… gah, I can’t even imagine how their first kiss will be like.

Draco was the very picture of an inspired artist, going to Harry’s despite the hour and the date, needing to do the brewing at that very moment and not thinking, just going with his instincts. I could relate to him, so I think you did a great job at describing how he felt before, during and after the brewing.

Since the Incident, one thing he had prided himself on was acting on liking instead of lust Interesting…

I can’t wait to know about the Incident, for Ginny to still feel like that… I don’t like her much, but I can’t deny she’s strong.

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