Someone wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-01-20 01:52 am (UTC)

Well, it really is amazing. You've created a new form of intimacy and sensuality, and you even made us visualized it!
I love a giddy Draco and a passionate in spite of himself Harry. And a successful potion!
The boys sure are at an awkward, undefined stage, shifting from first name basis to last name.
I felt bad when Harry suddenly cut the magical intimacy, depriving both Draco and himself.
My, what has he done to Ginny? Did he projected his anger violently? He mentions the danger of lust. I wonder if he lost control, desiring her too much. That would explain the whole Weasley family not being with him like they used to be. I think he was referring to the sad state of affair when he sympathised with Malfoy about being somewhat estranged from his family on the other chapter.

Nimue

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