Well, I finally got to read this story. I read the chapters that you've posted already and I have to say that what I love most about the story is your description of the magic that is necessary for the potion. It even sounds magical.
I admit I like your Harry and his need for control, though I am still curious about the Incident you mention a few times.
The Draco you describe is intriguing though I am a bit split in my thoughts of him.
What I wonder though is if Harry would come to the sensible conclusion that there IS a way for him to have more control (which for him seems to be a major issue) over the potion and its making. And I hope to see it happen. I almost fear mentioning my idea, for I fear manipulating your story, which I'd hate, even if I think that it would be the sensible and really obvious choice. I guess I'll withhold my mind for now, but if you want to know, I'll happily say.
I'll admit that while I generally hate to change the track of a story, I'd prefer to see this happen.
So, for now I think that it is strange that Draco would relinquish a percent of the potion to a person like Ms. Nott. It doesn't sound like him all that much. I'd be more willing to expect him to do anything within his power to trick her or find another way to thwart her.
The verdict so far is that I am hooked and I'll be following the story chapter by chapter, and I'll try to comment when I read and leave my honest opinion.
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I admit I like your Harry and his need for control, though I am still curious about the Incident you mention a few times.
The Draco you describe is intriguing though I am a bit split in my thoughts of him.
What I wonder though is if Harry would come to the sensible conclusion that there IS a way for him to have more control (which for him seems to be a major issue) over the potion and its making. And I hope to see it happen. I almost fear mentioning my idea, for I fear manipulating your story, which I'd hate, even if I think that it would be the sensible and really obvious choice. I guess I'll withhold my mind for now, but if you want to know, I'll happily say.
I'll admit that while I generally hate to change the track of a story, I'd prefer to see this happen.
So, for now I think that it is strange that Draco would relinquish a percent of the potion to a person like Ms. Nott. It doesn't sound like him all that much. I'd be more willing to expect him to do anything within his power to trick her or find another way to thwart her.
The verdict so far is that I am hooked and I'll be following the story chapter by chapter, and I'll try to comment when I read and leave my honest opinion.