ext_6733 ([identity profile] mistress-mab.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-01-16 10:16 pm (UTC)

I seriously love this. I just read all of this in one sitting and wanted to WEEP when there was NO MORE.

I really should go back and comment on the individual chapters, but I don't have time.

This is the kind of original fiction I like to read, so finding it in fanfiction, with characters I ADORE, is just wonderful. Your story reminds me a bit of House of Leaves mixed with a little Clive Barker.

Your writing is so tight and the imagery so vivid. When you've posted all the chapters, I want to print it out and read it in front of the fire, just like I would my favorite horror novel. If this were one of my books, I promise it would be well worn. Amazing work!

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