ext_204312 ([identity profile] lycias.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-01-15 09:42 pm (UTC)

In the words of Draco: "No!"

What did Harry do?! Ah! I believe you have a cruel number of cliffhangers for this story, it really isn't conducive to my health. The scene with the Unspeakables made me uneasy because that would mean they found out Harry freed Draco and is searching for Ron and Hermione.

Last thought, I really like that you haven't made Draco a complete sop. I like that his steel shows when he gives Harry those intent, considering looks or insults him. It will be strange to have him talk though (I have faith that will happen!)

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