ext_196952 ([identity profile] lorac64.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-01-10 03:44 pm (UTC)

Wow! I think the potion seeps out of the story and infects your readers with the dreamy, sideways feelings too. I liked this story, despite the little voice in the back of my head saying, "This is SO screwed up!" "Shut up," I tell it, "and just be happy that Harry escaped the horrifying consequences and that Draco finally suceeded at something big."

I think a sequel would ruin the misty hope/horror that lingers at the end of this story, but I am curious about a few things: Where is Harry's soul now? Does resurrected Lucius have Harry's face and body? Surely Draco will have to deal with some sort of aftermath? Will Lucius/Harry recognize poor orphaned James and Albus?

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