Well u sure did a good job with the time, and really helped the dates hahaha. And i think u didnt rush things because of how it looked like Harry just had realized what had been happened , while others already knew.. i dont know if i make myself clear.. cause i didnt undestand what i said hahahaha xD but yeah i think it all worked fine.

wait wait what Lucius has planned now?! what does he have planned exactly? ... is that a: i will write maybe another one shot? explaining how crazy is Lucius -hopeful eyes-

mm yes poor Harry, the moment he just kill his wife and daughter and the first thing he did was to think how to make it seem like and accident , it make me think that something was really happening to him! cause as u said he would definitely turn himself