ext_126450 ([identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-07-04 03:49 am (UTC)

Thank you!

That's what I usually try to do: remove the author's voice as a presence from the story and let the character's reaction leak through.

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