ext_33301 ([identity profile] ura-hd.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2007-12-16 07:08 pm (UTC)

Great story overall!!!!

I did not like the twist that Harry in this world blames and is disgusted by the Harry in the mirror world. It would have been nicer is Harrys in both words were happy but in different ways. I found the unhappy Harry in the mirror world a bit too much a stretch. Cannot explain exactly why, but I just react this way.

But overall, this is a great story. Very creative and very engaging!
Excellent job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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