ext_140948 ([identity profile] vwalk.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2007-12-10 06:01 pm (UTC)

Lovely chapter. I REALLY like this new confident Harry. His interaction with George was good. I liked the fact that Draco didn't cower away or attack. Your description of what his instincts were telling him and his struggle not to attack first was brilliant. I am really impressed at how you're able to maintain a very measured pace for the story with so few words. The plot doesn't seem rushed or lagging. Draco's healing is coming along slowly as is his relationship with Harry - and yet we're already at part 5 of a 6 part fic. You are a truly gifted author.

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