I loveloveloveLOVE your action scenes! They are definatly your very strongest points in writing (although you have many) And this chapter is no exception. Oooh, I cannot WAIT to see what happens now!

And OMG Andromeda how could you? There is no, no NO excusing that. I don't care what kind of grief or loss she suffered, that does not give her the right to cause more. And casting the Cruciatus on a Two-year-old!?!?!?!?!?!?! WTF Andromeda, W. T. F.

Draco is just...... Amazing. Seriously. Andromeda should know better then to take on a Malfoy in his own turf. I mean, come on. They're Malfoys. Logic leans toward them having nasty little traps for evil bitches like her. I mean, really now.

But anyway. YAY! So. Good. OMG