I loved the light hearted tone of this story. It’s also nice to see Harry chasing Draco for a change – though he seems to do it in a bumbling, goofy, yet loveable kind of way.
Loved the way you made Bellatrix’s madness funny with her turning Voldemort into some sort of evil sleeping beauty, just waiting for the right scheme to awaken him. Draco’s thoughts during the meeting are hilarious. He’s obliviated Dolohov twice and then wonders about his mental stability.
“If he comes after me, then I’ll kill him. Pow!” I’m STILL laughing at this line. And “Don’t worry your pretty little head about this, Malfoy,” said Potter, and patted his cheek,” cracks me up.
Great start – looking forward to more.