YAY! A fic for me! Oh, I'm so, so glad you're doing this!
Okay. That's enough exclamation points for now...
I really love this so far. The humor is just right, and Harry is the perfect amount of delightful and aggravating. Poor Draco, there's nothing worse than trying to protect someone who is totally oblivious.
This:
“Should I have said that you’re beautiful when you’re angry?” Potter looked concerned. “I almost said that, but I thought it was too girly. And I’m sure that you’re all man, Draco.”
made me giggle. And “Look, Draco—can I call you Draco?—“ "No." is just classic. And I loved this line, too: Draco wished fervently that his mother had had better taste in family members. It's just so Draco.
I love your Death Eaters, I love Draco's attitude about attending the meetings (I feel like the meetings are Death Eaters Anonymous), I love the way he baits them and views them as entertainment...just perfect. I like fics where the bad guys are really as bad as everyone says, but every once in a while it's great to read something that points out how ridiculous they are and how notoriously bad at planning they are. Hee.
And Harry's attempts at seduction are priceless. Give in, Draco! You can protect him AND shag him!
Woot!
Okay. That's enough exclamation points for now...
I really love this so far. The humor is just right, and Harry is the perfect amount of delightful and aggravating. Poor Draco, there's nothing worse than trying to protect someone who is totally oblivious.
This:
“Should I have said that you’re beautiful when you’re angry?” Potter looked concerned. “I almost said that, but I thought it was too girly. And I’m sure that you’re all man, Draco.”
made me giggle. And “Look, Draco—can I call you Draco?—“ "No." is just classic. And I loved this line, too: Draco wished fervently that his mother had had better taste in family members. It's just so Draco.
I love your Death Eaters, I love Draco's attitude about attending the meetings (I feel like the meetings are Death Eaters Anonymous), I love the way he baits them and views them as entertainment...just perfect. I like fics where the bad guys are really as bad as everyone says, but every once in a while it's great to read something that points out how ridiculous they are and how notoriously bad at planning they are. Hee.
And Harry's attempts at seduction are priceless. Give in, Draco! You can protect him AND shag him!
*smooch*