Absolutely lovely. Every chapter, and the way you've finished this, is written beautifully.
The only thing that grates on me is Eugenie's punishment. That is beyond foul. I understand that it's there to show that Draco isn't all sunshine and light now that he has Harry, but the idea of it makes me feel physically ill.
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Absolutely lovely. Every chapter, and the way you've finished this, is written beautifully.
The only thing that grates on me is Eugenie's punishment. That is beyond foul. I understand that it's there to show that Draco isn't all sunshine and light now that he has Harry, but the idea of it makes me feel physically ill.