um, that's pretty much the only reaction i have at the end of this. let's see whether i can come up with anything better...
i love how the two of them are honest with themselves and with one another about both their history and where they are now -- harry thinking draco is beautiful and draco "demanding" compliments! yay!
and really, "you make me feel alive when i see you fly," is just... it's a statement that shows so much potential for love, because isn't love when you feel most alive? the two feelings seem so tangled together for me -- even when i think of the joy i feel while singing, it's an expansive love. love for the universe.
well, that was a digression.
oh, and i found a typo (as i seem wont to do): Malfoy laughed, a hard, steely sound, and then jumprf upwards. but i should also note that while i noted the typo in my head during my first read, it took three more readings before i could find it again -- i got that caught up in the story-telling.
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um, that's pretty much the only reaction i have at the end of this. let's see whether i can come up with anything better...
i love how the two of them are honest with themselves and with one another about both their history and where they are now -- harry thinking draco is beautiful and draco "demanding" compliments! yay!
and really, "you make me feel alive when i see you fly," is just... it's a statement that shows so much potential for love, because isn't love when you feel most alive? the two feelings seem so tangled together for me -- even when i think of the joy i feel while singing, it's an expansive love. love for the universe.
well, that was a digression.
oh, and i found a typo (as i seem wont to do): Malfoy laughed, a hard, steely sound, and then jumprf upwards. but i should also note that while i noted the typo in my head during my first read, it took three more readings before i could find it again -- i got that caught up in the story-telling.
so, again: YAY!