I wasn't expecting to like this. I think I was afraid, at first, that Lucius would be another Draco, but he's definitely not. Unfortunately, I have a "contraction of the vocabulary" and cannot explain myself further. No matter what your fears, I can't find any OOCness here. Lucius is pretty much spot-on as for how I would imagine him. Completely dominant and arrogant, but willing to work for what he wants, instead of expecting that which he desires to fall immediately at his feet. Harry, well, you've managed to write over 100 plausible Harrys. I wasn't worried at all about him.
Very interesting, and I look forward to chapter 3.
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I think I was afraid, at first, that Lucius would be another Draco, but he's definitely not. Unfortunately, I have a "contraction of the vocabulary" and cannot explain myself further.
No matter what your fears, I can't find any OOCness here. Lucius is pretty much spot-on as for how I would imagine him. Completely dominant and arrogant, but willing to work for what he wants, instead of expecting that which he desires to fall immediately at his feet.
Harry, well, you've managed to write over 100 plausible Harrys. I wasn't worried at all about him.
Very interesting, and I look forward to chapter 3.