Lucius is amazingly egotistical and self-centered. Lol. He's just not a sympathetic character, and I really am curious how you are going to make him one. Right now he wants Harry for the sake of having him, so when is he going to want him just because it's Harry?

Seven years without sex? Oh, Harry... Poor guy.

And Draco, I can totally see him becoming this person you've created. Growing up but still weak and still very, very intimidated by his father.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!