Quite the emotional chapter... or quite another emotional chapter, I should say. I'm fascinated by the notion that Harry might have learned of his being a Horcrux earlier in the story than Rowling wrote it. How horrible to have to face that. I mean, why would he continue to learn and to defend himself if he has to die anyway? I assume Snape doesn't know in this version. I can only imagine what his reaction will be, and since Dumbledore doesn't know he's Harry's father, he'll probably tell him... oh, my.
Great story. Just wonderful.

C Dumbledore