ext_42340 ([identity profile] callistianstar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2009-11-29 01:17 am (UTC)

I can't describe how much I was frustrated with Al here, reading this point of view and wanting to yank his hair out. I'm with spungen_spinks, in that I also found it "diffictult to see Albus resenting his father his entire life." I love how you progressed this though. Especially how the different conversations with his father changed tone throughout, at least by the end in that he decided to build a real relationship with Harry. Wonderful job.

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