Great read! It was an emotion roller coaster in a good way. It's different reading it from a second generation perspective, and an extremely flawed character who is the 'villian' here to Draco and Harry's relationship. Even though it's a classic case of misunderstanding that could have been 'fixed' by better communication, you took us on a journey through the maze that is in Al's mind. Despite it being seen through Al's spying eyes, that scene with Draco and Harry snogging was the cherry on top for me, I'm a sucker for their UST :)