What a great view on Al's likeness to Harry.
The swirl of emotions really let us see what kind of strange chaos was always haunting Al. It was enough that I honestly felt so sad for him when the comparisons stopped but Al kept holding on to that image of being little Harry.
Draco and Scorpius were completely in character and stayed true to what the next generation of Malfoys would be like. (at least in my mind)
I really really liked this. You should write more second gen!