http://natane.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] natane.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2009-11-21 01:37 am (UTC)

amazing as usual. i'm looking forward to the next part.

i especially liked
“I only saw some of them fly up sometimes,” Draco said. “Never very regularly. But maybe he’s changed that, too, since I’ve been home.” He had to blink and swallow when he thought about that. Home, but it no longer felt that way. Now it was the house where the Dark Lord lived and his mother was tortured.

this was a really strong paragraph, and it really made me get inside Draco's head.

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