Whoa, great chapter! It’ll take a while to say everything I want to say about it…
I knew Harry wouldn’t hesitate to join the battle, though… he should learn not to be so rash.
they were probably fighting Ketchum, and Harry couldn’t imagine that he would survive that
That actually bothered me. I don’t know how to express it, it’s something Harry has that’s always present in the books (and has always bothered me). I’m sorry, I wish I could put into words what I’m thinking. It’s not something bad actually, it’s very IC.
The third was that Arrowshot was gone
That… didn’t surprise me much. Again, I can’t say why, it was something said in last chapter (or something Draco thought, I can’t remember). I wonder how Draco will react when he has time to think. He trusted her to be on their side, what will he do about the others he recruited to help them find about Nihil? Does he still trust his judgment despite what happened with Arrowshot? Veritasetum is a good way to start, but people could get corrupted at any moment and it’d be unpractical then. Every time they meet they’ll have to use it.
Nihil was awfully familiar with Ketchum. Nihil is either one of the instructors or someone very close to them. Speaking of Ketchum, he has become my favourite instructor! :D The fight was awesome. Ketchum was awesome in it. It’s clear Draco respects him, and it’s as if he has to remind himself Ketchum is a Mudblood to keep himself from respecting him too much.
“I think we should call ourselves the Fellowship.”
LOVED THAT!!!!! :D Well, it kind of fits, if one of Nihil’s preferred weapons is grief magic.
I studied a journal Dumbledore left behind. It had a lot of the contact information for the Order of the Phoenix, descriptions of how it worked
He should have told Draco that, when they didn’t know where to begin and first decided to look for allies. Can’t wait to find out what advices the journal can give.
“Your parents have corrupted you for life by naming you after a character in those ridiculous Muggle books,” Portillo Lopez snapped.
::lol:: That sounds like Ketchum has talked about the book a lot. Really, I can’t blame him.
Looking forward to next chapter. And to Draco looking into that Pensieve. By the way, where is it, in the room he now shares with Harry? Does he trust Harry not to peek under the cloth?
(This is totally unrelated but I’ve been planning to ask you for a while. Ketchum said his parent named him Samwise because they felt he was the real hero, is that your opinion, or just something some people think?).
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I knew Harry wouldn’t hesitate to join the battle, though… he should learn not to be so rash.
they were probably fighting Ketchum, and Harry couldn’t imagine that he would survive that
That actually bothered me. I don’t know how to express it, it’s something Harry has that’s always present in the books (and has always bothered me). I’m sorry, I wish I could put into words what I’m thinking. It’s not something bad actually, it’s very IC.
The third was that Arrowshot was gone
That… didn’t surprise me much. Again, I can’t say why, it was something said in last chapter (or something Draco thought, I can’t remember). I wonder how Draco will react when he has time to think. He trusted her to be on their side, what will he do about the others he recruited to help them find about Nihil? Does he still trust his judgment despite what happened with Arrowshot? Veritasetum is a good way to start, but people could get corrupted at any moment and it’d be unpractical then. Every time they meet they’ll have to use it.
Nihil was awfully familiar with Ketchum. Nihil is either one of the instructors or someone very close to them. Speaking of Ketchum, he has become my favourite instructor! :D The fight was awesome. Ketchum was awesome in it. It’s clear Draco respects him, and it’s as if he has to remind himself Ketchum is a Mudblood to keep himself from respecting him too much.
“I think we should call ourselves the Fellowship.”
LOVED THAT!!!!! :D Well, it kind of fits, if one of Nihil’s preferred weapons is grief magic.
I studied a journal Dumbledore left behind. It had a lot of the contact information for the Order of the Phoenix, descriptions of how it worked
He should have told Draco that, when they didn’t know where to begin and first decided to look for allies. Can’t wait to find out what advices the journal can give.
“Your parents have corrupted you for life by naming you after a character in those ridiculous Muggle books,” Portillo Lopez snapped.
::lol:: That sounds like Ketchum has talked about the book a lot. Really, I can’t blame him.
Looking forward to next chapter. And to Draco looking into that Pensieve. By the way, where is it, in the room he now shares with Harry? Does he trust Harry not to peek under the cloth?
(This is totally unrelated but I’ve been planning to ask you for a while. Ketchum said his parent named him Samwise because they felt he was the real hero, is that your opinion, or just something some people think?).