Your action scenes are brilliant like always! I love how you portrayed Ketchum as highly skilled. It only makes since, as he's a fully trained Auror. I always thought Aurors were portrayed with too much stupidity. It was also enjoyable to see the instructors interact with each other.

The support between Draco and Harry is wonderful. They are getting more in-tune with each other every chapter.

Wonderful!

But don't think we haven't forgotten about Snape's memories!