http://allycat-aria.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] allycat-aria.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2009-11-18 04:51 am (UTC)

This was wonderful. I love your Snape.

I love your Snape.

I love your characterization of him and his inner thoughts. How he's seeing more of Lily in Harry now.

It's simply brilliant that Harry is such a good liar, not with his lies, but that he feeds what other people -expect- to see/hear. They will believe what they want to believe. And they will never suspect him because they do not believe it is a part of his character; they underestimate him.

I like how Harry seems so obsessed about his appearance and bloodline. I really hope to see more of the bloodline curse soon.

And Harry getting angry for Draco being Draco. Too funny! And so them too!

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