http://allycat-aria.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] allycat-aria.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2009-11-16 10:38 pm (UTC)

Still Speechless

This was beautiful. It seemed like a departure from your normal work. I loved the poetry. The whole story had a surreal quality to it, especially towards the end. I think my favorite aspect was the narration towards the end, when they shared thoughts. Although it wasn't outright poetry, it had a very noticeable rhythm to it. I ended up speaking the sentences aloud just so I could feel the cadence roll off my tongue.

Very inspiring. You have such a way with abstract concepts and images.

Have you ever thought of publishing some original work? I know that a lot of your fanfics depend on the existing HP world, but some, like this one, can really stand on it's own.

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