I've been reading up on this fic and I just wanted to say that I love it, I especially the whole mystery of Nihil, you're amazing at writing mysteries and plot like this, I think you must be one of the most imaginative fanfic authors I've ever read, you can write the most beautiful plots. and you do write scary cliffhangers!
I love the way the relatinoship between Harry and Draco developed, and that Draco was able to understand Harry and give so much understanding, support and love. I love how he handled the situation with Ron, and how he's showing Harry that he can really trust him and not be so damn self sacrificial, and value himself and their love. They're really learning to be partners and lovers, to trust each other. I loved Draco letting himself be soothed and letting his guard down with Harry completely in his chapter, and Harry watching over him, so lovely!
Even if I adore the Trio friendship, I liked the confrontation, the fight, and the recociliation with Ron. He learned not to take Harry so much for granted, wich he does sometimes even if he loves him like a brother. I admit it was difficult for me to read the way Harry and Ginny fell out (because I usually like them to break up and stay friends) and because in this fic it sounded like Ginny wanted Harry to protect her and she felt he wasn't able to, while I see her as someone who would break up with him because he protects her too much, pretty much the way she felt in Bastardly/Opportunity. She seems a bit like Percy, or even Hermione in the way she spoke, especially at beginning: so cold and logical. I guess maybe the war changed her in this fic. I hope they get to have a reconciliation or at least that Ginny gets to understand that she was wrong and apologize, the way Ron did (it seems she's starting to realize some things) But that's just me and I can freely admit that I love the Weasleys ;-)
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I love the way the relatinoship between Harry and Draco developed, and that Draco was able to understand Harry and give so much understanding, support and love. I love how he handled the situation with Ron, and how he's showing Harry that he can really trust him and not be so damn self sacrificial, and value himself and their love.
They're really learning to be partners and lovers, to trust each other. I loved Draco letting himself be soothed and letting his guard down with Harry completely in his chapter, and Harry watching over him, so lovely!
Even if I adore the Trio friendship, I liked the confrontation, the fight, and the recociliation with Ron. He learned not to take Harry so much for granted, wich he does sometimes even if he loves him like a brother. I admit it was difficult for me to read the way Harry and Ginny fell out (because I usually like them to break up and stay friends) and because in this fic it sounded like Ginny wanted Harry to protect her and she felt he wasn't able to, while I see her as someone who would break up with him because he protects her too much, pretty much the way she felt in Bastardly/Opportunity. She seems a bit like Percy, or even Hermione in the way she spoke, especially at beginning: so cold and logical. I guess maybe the war changed her in this fic. I hope they get to have a reconciliation or at least that Ginny gets to understand that she was wrong and apologize, the way Ron did (it seems she's starting to realize some things) But that's just me and I can freely admit that I love the Weasleys ;-)
- Morgana