I really loved the tenderness between them in this chapter. Seems your pre-slash boys are getting away from you a little eh? Funny how characters decide what they want to do. I know you said this is pre-slash but the boys seem to like each other and are fighting you a bit. *giggle*

I'm all for it though, they are really hot and sweet in this story! Your writing just seems to get better and better. I must say this is one of the scariest villains I've ever read.

Clare