i love the idea of a butt-ugly goblin painting.

your obstacles were really creative. like the manticore they can't kill without getting in big trouble.

i loved them flirting with each other from the first moment they were together in the lobby.

i completely agree with you that canon!harry shows an aptitude for sarcasm while (at least) snarking at the dursleys.

nice parallel with the painting that goes to the ones who want it most and the sword that comes to the gryffindor that needs it most.

and your funny lines, like That looks nothing like me, and I certainly hope that you aren’t that ugly naked. were very funny. :)

the one thing that confuses me is that i thought -- in canon -- griphook ended up with the sword of gryffindor?