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glorafin ([personal profile] glorafin) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2012-04-23 07:44 pm (UTC)

Currently reading this, and enjoying it quite a bit. It had been ages since I read one of your stories.

I love reader to point out my typos, I hope you're the same way...

Shouldn't that be talk or speak instead of take in that sentence:

That was the problem,” Potter said, and Draco reached over and pressed his jaw shut so that he wouldn’t take with his mouth full.


Cheers.

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