glorafin (
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2012-04-23 07:44 pm (UTC)
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Currently reading this, and enjoying it quite a bit. It had been ages since I read one of your stories.
I love reader to point out my typos, I hope you're the same way...
Shouldn't that be talk or speak instead of take in that sentence:
That was the problem,” Potter said, and Draco reached over and pressed his jaw shut so that he wouldn’t take with his mouth full.
Cheers.
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I love reader to point out my typos, I hope you're the same way...
Shouldn't that be talk or speak instead of take in that sentence:
That was the problem,” Potter said, and Draco reached over and pressed his jaw shut so that he wouldn’t take with his mouth full.
Cheers.