http://gyspim.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] gyspim.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2009-10-17 02:29 am (UTC)

I love this story. I follow both this and Practicing Liars currently. I think I have read everything you have written. :) I did find one little typo in this chapter. "Draco reached over and pressed his jaw shut so that he wouldn’t take with his mouth full." Is it supposed to be talk instead of take?

Love your writing and anxiously waiting for your next updates.

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