ext_168783 ([identity profile] invincible-sum.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2009-09-01 11:55 pm (UTC)

Very good chapter! I quite like the scale-snatching spell, Harry's musings about the decadence and employees at Corybantes, and Draco's *seeming* recognition of the things that Harry has sacrificed for his job and his seeming desire to cuddle H. ;) I also like the wrist-holding line, the carpet derision, the additional info. on Harry's bad experience with Rozier and his distance from Ron & Hermione, his relationship with Kingsley, and this line:

Harry did get to relax occasionally, but only when most of the criminals in Britain decided to take a simultaneous nap.

(I'm sure that there was more....)

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