I really loved this fiction.
I liked the push me, pull me back and forth
between Harry and Draco.
I loved the line, 'we have done some
intimate things, but have never been
intimate." I am glad Harry finally got
accepted as becoming an auror.
I am glad Harrys self esteem was improving,
instead of being a glorified babysitter for
Ron, and feeling worthless. His life
wasted, living in the glory of other peoples
accomplishments, trailing around Ron because
he had nothing better to do.
A very sweet and satisfying ending.
I enjoy your writing very much!