ext_168783 ([identity profile] invincible-sum.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2009-08-22 08:22 pm (UTC)

Great chapter! The dynamics of Harry's rapprochement with the Weasleys were so right and so touching, as was Draco's encouraging Harry to turn away from dementors to the sorts of creatures that they both would really prefer to hunt. The manifestations of Draco's vampness also continue to be highly amusing, as when he thought that he had cornered the market on paleness in their relationship, and that he no longer underestimated Harry's snarls because "he didn’t have the length or sharpness of tooth to carry out the part." The "copulation" bit was also very funny, and it's so nice to see H&D both acting a bit like their old selves at the end there. It's a shame that this story (and "Phoenix") will end so soon :( Beyond everything else, I think that it would be very interesting to have seen the Weasleys, at least, having to reconcile themselves to Harry's new beau *snicker*

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