Harry will come off as pretty sad no matter what he does, I think, but this is better than the kind of sad he was exhibiting in chapter 4. :)
I thought it probably would be obvious; Harry's the kind of person who could be taken in, but not many readers would be. Still, I wanted to show how completely he got lulled. Harry's not stupid. Present him with some truth in obvious enough fashion and he'll go for it.
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Harry will come off as pretty sad no matter what he does, I think, but this is better than the kind of sad he was exhibiting in chapter 4. :)
I thought it probably would be obvious; Harry's the kind of person who could be taken in, but not many readers would be. Still, I wanted to show how completely he got lulled. Harry's not stupid. Present him with some truth in obvious enough fashion and he'll go for it.