ext_7846 ([identity profile] slashpuppy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2009-02-28 04:17 am (UTC)

Re: Inter Vivos 20

There was just *soooo* much in here.

Finally getting an understanding of why Dumbledore has done the things he's done with respect to Harry! God Dumbledore comes across as selfish!

I don't think I can feel more sorry for Harry than I do at this moment. Poor, poor boy! There's just so much resting on his thin shoulders. I'm glad he's decided to stand up for himself and take action rather than passively giving in to his 'fate'!

I kinda cried at this line though:
And he shut the door before Severus could even make the reassurances about Harry’s not being alone that he realized, now, he ought to have made from the beginning.
Even when Severus is trying to do what's best he misses out on doing something so fundamentally important!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Wee fixes?
- He was, in reality, not sure of that at all, but he knew how to persuade her so that he would do it. [so that she would]???
- I 'm just glad [I'm]

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