I think that because I understand Harry better than I understand Draco at the moment, I'm spending less time in his viewpoint than I might. I'll try to correct that in the next chapter.

oh no, that wasn't meant as a criticism at all!!! i think i'm just so fascinated with draco's view of harry at the moment, i'm seeing things more from his pov.

plus, i imagine i've read enough of your work by now that you know i like to over-theorize everything. :P

the story is fantastic, i completely loving it!!!