ext_76746 ([identity profile] tray-la-la.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-10-07 12:42 am (UTC)

omg, harry is so guh-inducing in this chapter! him bound and wanting and triumphant is just jfdklsJfdkls!!! *dies*

his obsession truly came out here, and his decision to throw caution to the wind and plow full steam ahead is very, very him. i'm pleased that draco finally realized that he's truly well and screwed, which is exactly how i like him. ;) though i am still very nervous about what choice he's decided on.

loved this line:

Caught between a loss of honor and dignity, and a loss of all he was, Draco twisted on the grass, feeling as though a hook had stabbed deep into his guts, and Potter lay beside him, face limp with pleasure.

beautiful.

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