Draco turned out to be not too creepy after all. I like the creepy Draco of the past two chapters. Then again, Harry might not want to stay with him.
The shift of emotions between the last chapter and this one feels a bit jarring to me. I do like the hopeful tone, but Harry's calm acceptance felt off. I don't know how to describe it... it feels a bit anticlimactic? Argh. I hate using that word, it sounds so negative. Overall, I do like the ending.
I 'm curious how those under the Troublestone's influence will react. Any chances you will be revisiting this universe?
Love the premise of this fic, and I think you pulled it off wonderfully. You kept me guessing right to the very end. I look forward to whatever you'll think up next.
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The shift of emotions between the last chapter and this one feels a bit jarring to me. I do like the hopeful tone, but Harry's calm acceptance felt off. I don't know how to describe it... it feels a bit anticlimactic? Argh. I hate using that word, it sounds so negative. Overall, I do like the ending.
I 'm curious how those under the Troublestone's influence will react. Any chances you will be revisiting this universe?
Love the premise of this fic, and I think you pulled it off wonderfully. You kept me guessing right to the very end. I look forward to whatever you'll think up next.