ext_126450 ([identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-07-30 12:22 am (UTC)

Thank you! It probably helps that I don't have as many subplots here as usual, since I started it with the conception that it would be only 8 or 10 chapters long, and so I can linger over things like Harry and Draco's getting along better without neglecting the main plot of Lucius's healing.

Well, ending this chapter as I did wasn't ideal, but I would have had to write about 5000 more words to deal with everything the last few revelations raised (and this story's chapters are already longer than normal for me). I thought it best to split it, much as I split the plan used against John Grey in 'Changing of the Guard.'

And yes, "flavor" is right; that's a typo. Thank you for catching it.

Thank you for giving my WiP's a chance.

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