I liked the revelations in this chapter. I love the somehow slow, graceful way this story develops. Almost as if in a Malfoy-way. I think one of the strongest points of this story of yours is the pacing. It is good and its progress is quite significant in these 12 chapters, yet it doesn't feel like that at all.

I like the weird mating dance between Draco and Harry and I am once again impressed by your imagination where magic's concerned. Really you develop with each story you write.

I have just two points that disturb me.

One is that for the first time the ending of the chapter jumped on me out of nowhere. Till now every chapter (of all stories I've read) felt natural. It came like that was its place. This time I was stunned that it was over. I kind of felt like there was more that I didn't get. I guess it's my own understanding, or maybe this chapter and the next are too combined, I don't know. I read it twice and even knowing it ended there it still felt a bit sudden.

Point two is more of a question. Is the word "favor" meant to be 'favor', or 'flavour' in the following line. “I’m learning how you taste,” Draco whispered. “I hope you don’t mind my going slowly. I prefer to appreciate the favors individually.” It reads as if 'flavour' is more appropriate.

Thanks for writing. You are among the few authors I read chapter for chapter instead of waiting for the complete work.