ext_126450 ([identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-07-08 02:56 am (UTC)

Thank you!

I think details are part of what makes a long fic like this fun to read. If it's just a straight, relentless plotline without many side-trips, the story probably doesn't need to be novel-length.

Maxwell and Draco would drive each other crazy. Or rather, Maxwell would drive Draco crazy and Draco would make inconsequential attempts at revenge. :)

The next part of the plan confirms why they brought Nusante. The major problem at this point is that I could have written one very long chapter and one very short one, but instead I split the action over a cliffhanger.

And thank you!

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