ext_126450 ([identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-06-27 02:09 am (UTC)

Re: Fantastic

Thanks! I felt the chapter was mostly conversations with just a bit of action at the end- one of my biggest worries with writing is that the characters talk too much- but I'm very glad it held your interest.

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