ext_194254 ([identity profile] neji-chan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2007-12-09 05:33 am (UTC)

As much as I love igyawm, and as much as I anted to read your one-shot, this update is what I really was waiting for. It's horror, and it's good.

Great chapter! Harry better get used to the nightmares, because if Draco has them now, it'll be 100 times worst as he gets back his memories. I loved the way he tries to comfort Draco and how all the time is aware of his ribs and being careful. I love how Draco wants comfort, almost demands it, but at the same time he tries to keep some of his pride.

Hermione’s voice appeared on cue in his mind. Because he needs human contact, Harry. Tell me that you could survive being chained up and tortured in a dungeon for a year and then not be madly glad to see the first other human being who wasn’t trying to hurt you. What would Harry do without Hermione's voice? After 11 years with no human contact (that didn't hurt) when he was a child, Harry should know that. I understand the situation is different, so maybe he doesn't realized how Draco feels. I wonder what'll happen once Draco starts regaining his memories. He needs human contact now, but maybe that'll change a bit. even if he knows Harry wouldn't hurt him, it'll be difficult getting over his fears...

he was hardly an inspiring public speaker, as the Ministry had already found out to its embarrassment Oh God, what did he say? Apart from "Er.." ::lol::

there was a whole facet on the sphere for sarcastic phrases Of course there are! Harry would start thinking he's not really Draco if there weren't. It shows that Draco's still himself, even after all that happened. Harry should be relieved.

Malfoy had participated in creating these horrors he and Harry had faced Oh, Harry ::sighs:: Thinking the worst of someone he's always thought to be evil is very IC. So is jumping to conclusions without knowing all the facts. I want to slap Harry in the head and yell "Helloo, Professor Snape?" “Do you understand what you have to do?” Harry has no idea what Draco was asked. As if Draco would have voluntarily offered himself as a guinea pig for those experiments.

I can't wait for all the "Pretty damn dark and gory" stuff to start! Mainly with more Pensieves which by the way, what the hell are they doing there?

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