ext_80402 ([identity profile] agr8fae.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-06-22 05:28 pm (UTC)

Yes!!! Hahaha! Go Hermione!
I think I noticed a typo at the very beginning: "Thinking about her with lust in his eyes" should be lust in her eyes, I think.
Yay!!!

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